{"id":111285,"date":"2026-10-26T09:08:49","date_gmt":"2026-10-26T13:08:49","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/?p=111285"},"modified":"2026-10-26T09:08:49","modified_gmt":"2026-10-26T13:08:49","slug":"family-history-month-week-4-write-a-short-narrative-about-1-ancestor","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/family-history-month-week-4-write-a-short-narrative-about-1-ancestor.html","title":{"rendered":"Family History Month, Week 4: Write a Short Narrative About 1 Ancestor"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><strong><em>Introduction:<\/em><\/strong><em> In this article \u2013 to celebrate Family History Month in October \u2013 Gena Philibert-Ortega describes how to write a short narrative about your ancestor. Gena is a genealogist and author of the book \u201cFrom the Family Kitchen.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n<p>It\u2019s hard to believe that October is almost over. How are you progressing with your Family History Month tasks? If you\u2019ve been following along you should have made some progress with your first four generations. As a reminder: <a href=\"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/family-history-month-week-1-conduct-a-4-generation-audit.html\">Week 1: Conduct a 4-Generation Audit<\/a>; <a href=\"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/family-history-month-week-2-create-a-timeline.html\">Week 2: Create a Timeline<\/a>; and <a href=\"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/family-history-month-week-3-what-am-i-missing.html\">Week 3: What Am I Missing?<\/a><\/p>\n<p>This isn\u2019t a contest, so if you didn\u2019t start at the beginning of the month or are taking longer (I know I am) just keep going. Having those tasks completed will mean your family history is in much better shape than when you started.<\/p>\n<p>Now, we are ready for Week 4.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Write a Short Narrative<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>When this <a href=\"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/october-4-weeks-of-family-history-month.html\">Family History Month challenge started<\/a>, I wrote this:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>Week 4: Write a Short Narrative<\/p>\n<p>Genealogy can be overwhelming and there\u2019s no doubt that research is more fun than writing it all down to share. Instead of thinking about writing a book or an ancestor\u2019s story, I\u2019m going to choose one event and write up something that I can then add images to and share with my family. Having done my audit, created a timeline, and identified what is missing, this step should be easier than starting from scratch.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>Why did I stress a \u201cshort narrative\u201d?<\/p>\n<p>When I started family history research decades ago, a family history magazine I read had advertisements for family history book publishers. The publishers would pose with these large tomes, hundreds of pages of someone\u2019s life work about their family.<\/p>\n<p>Back then I was convinced that was the end goal: publish a huge book on everyone in the family tree. Not only would this be costly (most likely $50 or more 30 years ago), it was also something that other family members weren\u2019t as excited about. We keep hearing that people don\u2019t read anymore and my guess is that a book of hundreds of pages of names, dates, and places isn\u2019t a fun summer read for most family members.<\/p>\n<p>My family is most likely like yours. They aren\u2019t interested in family history. Sure, when I tell one story or show a photograph, they are interested. Or when we are watching a movie and I explain that a family member fought in that war or experienced something similar, they are appreciative \u2013 but to haul out a 500-page encyclopedia about their ancestral roots, not so much\u2026<\/p>\n<p>So instead of a dense book, I\u2019m focusing on a few stories, heavily illustrated, to interest them. If they want more information I can share more, maybe even a longer narrative of the ancestor\u2019s life. I want to start with more recent ancestors because I think they are more easily relatable.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Example #1 Ben McNeil<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Last week I mentioned my ancestor Banjamin McNeil. I wrote:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>One of the narratives I\u2019d like to enhance is one written by a cousin about my grandmother\u2019s father, my great-grandfather Benjamin McNeil (1881-1956). This three-page history was read at his funeral on 2 June 1956. One of the sentences in the funeral sketch reads:<\/p>\n<p>\u201cDuring this time, besides providing for his own family, Ben helped his mother file and prove up her homestead, and he helped his brothers build her a home.\u201d<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>I\u2019m interested in writing more about this homestead, so I am going to take his mother\u2019s homestead file, add information from it and a map to show exactly where it is. I also want to add a photo of the area that it was in. I don\u2019t have a photo of that, but it\u2019s possible I can use Google Maps to locate it and use a satellite image. I also don\u2019t have a photo of the home, so reaching out to other family members or looking through the family history book about her life might help with that. Other than that, I can identify which brothers were in the area during that time and add their names to that narrative. I still have information I need to gather so it\u2019s not quite ready yet.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Example #2 Oscar Philibert<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Another way I can write up a narrative is to take one document and explain it further. Years ago, I wrote an article for the GenealogyBank blog about my great-grandfather Oscar Philibert: <a href=\"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/family-research-mystery-great-grandfathers-kewpie-doll-tattoo.html\">Family Research Mystery: Great-Grandfather\u2019s Kewpie Doll Tattoo?<\/a><\/p>\n<p>I discovered the information about this tattoo on his WWII draft registration card. My family doesn\u2019t know about WWII draft registration cards or even what they were for. So now, I need to take what I learned about this tattoo and write about the draft registration, why a Navy veteran would have a kewpie doll tattoo, and add some illustrations of what it might have looked like. I will also add the images of the registration card and him in his navy uniform. The blog post is a good starting point, but I still have more work to do.<\/p>\n<p><strong>A Few Tips<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Writing can be intimidating to most people. As you consider writing up your family history keep the following in mind.<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><strong>Writing isn\u2019t a one-draft process.<\/strong> Just get the words on paper. You can go back and edit later. Don\u2019t worry if you can\u2019t spell well, that\u2019s what computer or online spell and grammar checks are for.<\/li>\n<li><strong>Consider writing as you research.<\/strong> Creating sentences about your research as you research can help make the process easier.<\/li>\n<li><strong>You don\u2019t need pages of text.<\/strong> Keep it simple. Keep it to one or two paragraphs. Use bullet points.<\/li>\n<li><strong>Use images to illustrate.<\/strong> People love images, whether it\u2019s maps, photographs, postcards, or images of documents. Use what you have or what you can find.<\/li>\n<li><strong>Ask a family member to \u201cproof\u201d your writing and make suggestions.<\/strong> They may have questions that you can answer in your text.<\/li>\n<li><strong>Remember that you know this research, but your family doesn\u2019t.<\/strong> Explain what the document means, label all family members in the photograph (stay away from general identifiers like \u201cgrandmother\u201d). Act as though the reader knows absolutely nothing about what you are writing about.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><strong>Happy Family History Month!<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>I hope all went well with your family history research this month. Give us an update in the comments below. This is a great opportunity for us all to learn from each other.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/sign-up?destination=%2Fcampaign%2Fpurchase%3Fsession%255Bexit_point%255D%3DLz9zX3JlZmVycmVyPSZzX3NpdGVsb2M9JnNfdHJhY2t2YWw9JmtiaWQ9Njk5MTk%253D\">Create a free account<\/a> at GenealogyBank for 7 days to start your journey and discover the stories your ancestors left behind.<\/p>\n<p><strong><em>Note on the header image:<\/em><\/strong> Family History Month graphic. Credit: <a href=\"https:\/\/depositphotos.com\/home.html\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">https:\/\/depositphotos.com\/home.html<\/a><\/p>\n<p><strong><em>Related Articles:<\/em><\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/october-4-weeks-of-family-history-month.html\">October: 4 Weeks of Family History Month<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/family-history-month-week-1-conduct-a-4-generation-audit.html\">Family History Month, Week 1: Conduct a 4-Generation Audit<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/family-history-month-week-2-create-a-timeline.html\">Family History Month, Week 2: Create a Timeline<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/family-history-month-week-3-what-am-i-missing.html\">Family History Month, Week 3: What Am I Missing?<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>In this article \u2013 to celebrate Family History Month in October \u2013 Gena Philibert-Ortega describes how to write a short narrative about your ancestor.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":5,"featured_media":111290,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_acf_changed":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[12713],"tags":[10548,2719],"class_list":["post-111285","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-genealogy-research-tips","tag-family-history-month","tag-genealogy-search-tips"],"acf":[],"jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_featured_media_url":"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2026\/10\/photo-1026-2026-featured-graphic-family-history-month.jpg","_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/111285","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/5"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=111285"}],"version-history":[{"count":5,"href":"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/111285\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":111291,"href":"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/111285\/revisions\/111291"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/111290"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=111285"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=111285"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.genealogybank.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=111285"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}